32.5. Quotation Essay Final Practice

Objective: To create a reusable structure for constructing a quotation response essay.

Writing Prompt

Consider the following quotation:

In our world of big names, curiously, our true heroes tend to be anonymous. 

In this life of illusion and quasi-illusion, the person of solid virtues who 

can be admired for something more substantial than his well-knownness often 

proves to be the unsung hero: the teacher, the nurse, the mother, the honest cop, 

the hard worker at lonely, underpaid, unglamorous, unpublicized jobs. 

-Daniel J Boorstin, historian, professor, attorney, and writer (1914-2004)

What, in your opinion, does this quotation try to teach? Do you agree with the sentiment? How might knowing this benefit a person?

32.4. "Little as They Try . . ." NJASK Final Practices

Ojective: To practice timed informational readings, multiple choice strategies, and open-ended question responses.

The Text:
"Little as They Try, Students Can't Get a 'D' Here," from The New York Times

32.2. "The Case for Cursive"

"The Case for Cursive" from The New York Times

32.1. "The Bookworm Who Became a Science Fiction Writer"

What Are We Learning Today?
Today, and this week, we're talking about multiple choice questions.

What Should I Know to Make My Work Easier?

1. Don't leave any multiple choice questions blank.

2. Blank answers: 0 points
    Random guesses: .25 point
    Able to Throw One Choice Out: .33
    Able to Throw Two Choices Out: .50 point
    Knowing the Answer: 1 point

3. Go through a multiple choice test twice -- first do the ones that you feel that you Know, and then go through and take care of the rest. Make no random guesses until you have under a minute left. Leave no answers blank.

4. Cross out answers that you are ruling out. Read all answers to all questions.

5. Run through the test two times.

The Text
Today's test is a sample one that is often released by the companies that make these tests. It's possible that you've seen it before. Click here and read it, "The Bookworm Who Became a Science Fiction Writer."

31.5. On Writing Prompts Writing Prompt W2.

31.5. On Writing Prompts Writing Prompt W2.
What Are We Learning Today?
We're writing a collaborative, explanatory essay on how to write good individual, persuasive essays. I know that it's a little confusing, let me explain.

What Do We Need to Know?
We've picked up a great many new techniques this year for writing our logical essays, and now is an apropos time to summarize and synthesize them into something bigger. We'll be talking about research reports in May and June, and those are different animals.

Writing Prompt
Next year, I'll greet a new bunch of students and spend a great deal of our time together attempting to help them write thesis-driven essays better, more easily, and more confidently. Think about all of the things that we've tried to incorporate into, master, and refine with our logical essays this year. One of the things I always have trouble with is that I am an English teacher, and think about English 40-80 hours a week, so I can sometimes think some things are easier than they are for students who have a million things to worry about. However, I am proud of the progress that my students make; I have felt for three years or so that everyone who tries in my class gets much more comfortable planning essays, writing well-structured paragraphs, and taking compositional risks in their work.

Writing Prompt
With you group, open up a file in Google Drive and share it with all four members and me. Write a letter to my class next year explaining to them how to write a thesis-driven essay well. Since there are four of you, this essay should end up being pretty long I would think, since there is so much to talk about -- planning, paragraphs, vocabulary, sensory details, transitions, kinds of examples -- if I were writing this, I think I'd need ten to fifteen paragraphs. Make sure to split up the work.

31.4. "We Are What We Quote" by Geoffrey O'Brien RI8.

What Are We Practicing Today?
We're practicing the reading and note-taking technique we learned last week.

What Should We Review to Do This Well?
1. Number the paragraphs.
2. Read, looking for the main idea, the WHO+WHAT. Underline anything words or phrases that you think might be important.
3. Write the main idea in code in the margin of the text. Remember to use =, +, b/c, -->, BUT, and EX. to show the relationships between the ideas.
4. Make abbreviations for names by writing initials of things that you underlined and circling them. You can also write down previous paragraph numbers and circle them.

The Text

Here's an essay from the New York Times blog about how important quotations are to some writers that I thought was good - "We Are What We Quote"

31.3. "A Home at the End of Google Earth," David Kushner

31.3. "A Home at the End of Google Earth," David Kushner
What is Our Goal This Week?

We're just practicing the skills we've learned all year long to work out the kinks -- answering open-ended questions and multiple choice questions connected to a reading and a range of writing skills.

Do Now
On a piece of paper, execute a plan for the following prompt and write your thesis under the plan. Then, draw a line under that and write your conclusion only (whichever one you choose from the supporting reasons in your thesis). 5 minutes to plan and compose thesis, 5 minutes to write a body paragraph -- 10 minutes

Writing Situation
Let's imagine a scenario . . .
Thomas is fifteen years old. One day, his mother, Claire, tells him a surprising secret -- she is not his biological mother. He had been left on her doorstep when he was a year old. Claire had clearly seen the woman place a basket on the porch, but had not gone out to talk to her, and the woman disappeared quickly into a waiting car. Claire states that the entire thing had happened so fast that she was unable to react until the woman was gone.

A note attached to the basket gave the boy's name and birthday and asked that whoever find the basket consider taking care of him. Claire quickly fell in love with the baby and decided to do just that. She never told Thomas the story; she was worried that he would be upset by it at first, and the more time that passed, the less comfortable she felt revealing the secret.

However, that changed the night before. Claire had been watching television and seen the woman, plain as day, being interviewed on the news. Thomas's biological mother's name was Jennifer, and she lived about a half an hour away. She was being interviewed about a huge rainstorm that had knocked down power lines. Claire wrote down her name and hometown, and had the woman's address and Facebook page within five minutes. She explained that she thought that Thomas was old enough to decide what to do, and simply gave him the name of the woman and the address. Claire expressed a desire that he not even bother meeting her, afraid of what he might find.

Writing Prompt
Should Thomas go and visit his biological mother? Why or why not? Write a letter to him persuading him to go or to refrain from going.

Independent Practice

Today's Text
Today, we're going to read a story about homeland that is roughly similar to the kind of story that people give on standardized tests. The story is "A Home at the End of Google Earth," by David Kushner. We'll use it to practice  4 web screens long, should take 15-20 minutes to read

Open-Ended Question
The first question that Saroo wants to ask of his family is, "Did you look for me?"

• How do you think his mother's answer makes him feel?
• Imagine the answer was opposite . . . do you think Saroo would have regretted finding out?

Write this answer in Criterion, the prompt is entitled "1.8.6. SAROO GOOGLE EARTH Open-Ended."

31.2. "The Scholarship Jacket," Marta Salinas, W9.

What is Our Goal This Week?
We're just practicing the skills we've learned all year long to work out the kinks -- answering open-ended questions and multiple choice questions connected to a reading and a range of writing skills.

Do Now

On a piece of paper, execute a plan for the following prompt and write your thesis under the plan. Then, draw a line under that and write your introduction only (whichever one you choose from the supporting reasons in your thesis). 5 minutes to plan and compose thesis, 5 minutes to write a body paragraph -- 10 minutes

Writing Situation

Consider the following quotation from the great American novelist William Faulkner.

"The past isn't over -- it's not even past."

Writing Prompt

Do you agree with the sentiment expressed in the quotation? How do you know that it's true or false? How does might knowing this benefit a person in their life? Write an essay that explains your thoughts on this. Make sure to use reasons, facts, and examples to make your ideas clear.


Independent Practice

Today's Text
Today, we're going to read a story about homeland that is roughly similar to the kind of story that people give on standardized tests. The story is "The Scholarship Jacket," by Martinas Salinas. We'll use it to practice  2000 words, should take 10-15 minutes to read

Open-Ended Question

The story concerns characters who are confronted with difficult decisions with no clear answer.

• Choose a character that makes a difficult decision and explain the options and consequences of each choice, and the decision they ultimately make.
• What does this choice show about the character?

Write this answer in Criterion, the prompt is entitled "1.8.6. SCHOLARSHIP JACKET Open-Ended."

31.1. "Ribbons," Reread, W9.

What is Our Goal This Week?
We're just practicing the skills we've learned all year long to work out the kinks -- answering open-ended questions and multiple choice questions connected to a reading and a range of writing skills.

Do Now

On a piece of paper, execute a plan for the following prompt and write your thesis under the plan. Then, draw a line under that and write one of your body paragraphs (whichever one you choose from the supporting reasons in your thesis). 8 minutes to plan and compose thesis, 5 minutes to write a body paragraph -- 13 minutes

Writing Situation

I have very few problems in my personal life; I am generally a happy person at this point. However, there is still one thing in my life that causes me a great deal of pain, frustration, and sorrow -- the New York Mets. I don't really care about any other sports team, honestly, I root for the Nets and the Devils in a disinterested way, and even Rutgers's teams success or failure doesn't really hurt. When the Mets win, though, my day is somewhat improved. My problem is they don't win enough. Caring about the Mets, therefore, brings me more pain than pleasure, I think. That's stupid, right -- if rooting for one team makes me unhappy, and the only reason to watch things live or one TV is to be pass time pleasantly, I should switch my allegiance to another team.

Writing Prompt

Should I switch my favorite baseball team from the Mets to a better team? Why (or why not)? Write me a letter arguing for your position. Make sure to use reasons, facts, and examples to be as convincing as you can.

Independent Practice

Today's Text
We're rereading a text today, which is something that we do far too little of in school -- most of the best insights that I get from stories I don't get from my first reading. The story is "Ribbons," by Laurence Yep, a story that we read in September in order to master the Five Fingers technique. Now, we'll be using it to practice our open-ended questions technique. 3300 words, should take 20 minutes to read

Open-Ended Question

The narrator and her grandmother both learn the same theme in the story.

• What is that lesson that both take away from the story?
• How do you think that knowing this theme helps them (or anyone) in life?

Write this answer in Criterion, the prompt is entitled "1.8.5. RIBBONS Open-Ended."

30.4. "Don't Expect Me to Be Perfect" Barbara Park, SL1.

Today's reading is by a Korean-American teenager.
This photograph depicts a Korean family who
emigrated to Hawaii in the 19th century.

What Are We Practicing Today?
We're still working on our nonfiction reading for speed and comprehension. We're taking margin notes, through writing short notes in the margin of printed copies and through annotating electronic documents using the comments.

What Should We Remember?

• Number the paragraphs first, and preview while you're numbering. Don't circle them.
• Circle word or phrases (names or anything that you think is useful) and then create a code by making an initial and circling it.
• Refer to previous paragraph main ideas by writing the paragraph number and circling it.
• Use symbols to save space and time:

Suggested Symbol                   Meaning

• =                                      is/am/are/was/were/be/being/been
• +                                      and
• ex.                                   an example of this is . . . 
• Mr.H., "Hi"                     Mr. Harrison said, "Hello."
• b/c                                   because
• *                                      but
• ->                                    If/then 

The Text
The text, the personal essay "Don't Expect Me to Be Perfect," is a straightforward take from a teen on the issue of parents and children and what they owe each other, from Newsweek.

The Assignment
Read it and practice our rapid note-taking procedure.

30.3. "mk," Jean Fritz

The author of today's piece,
Jean Fritz, is best known for
her works of US history for kids.

What Are We Learning Today?
We're refining the note-taking skill that we discussed yesterday.

What Do I Need to Know?

1. Speed matters here, so focus on that. This skill is about reading and understanding things well enough to answer questions later in discussion or on multiple choice tests. Don't think of this as the assignment, think of it as making a reference sheet that you are allowed to use on a test later.
2. I am using * for the word "but," I've decided. Use it, too, if you don't have other strong feelings.
3. The ones I use most are This=that, this b/c that, and + Scientists are worried or * Scientists are worried, and kids dating ->low grades.
4. If something in quotation marks is three sentences or fewer, you need to read it, but you do not need to take a note on it. It is almost certainly a proving example for the previous paragraph. If it's longer, you need to, since it's a full paragraph with its own idea.
5. In some informational articles, there are conversations between people. For these, just take one note for the whole conversation.

The Text

We're talking about homeland, and I thought this selection from the seventh grade textbook was interesting. For thematic reasons, I want to talk about the following, so make sure to know what you think:

• The main character has two conversations with a person named Priscilla. Who is Priscilla and what is odd about their conversations?
• Where does the narrator consider her homeland? What is ironic about this?

Assignment: Read this memoir excerpt and take Reading Notes on it to prepare for our discussion.

30.1. "The White Umbrella," Parents and Homeland

What are We Learning Today?
To refine our skills, we are practicing identifying and explaining figurative language in context.

How do today's activities fit into our lives?

We're in the middle of our thematic unit, (Mother, Father, Home)land, where our goals is to think carefully and clarify our ideas about the responsibilities and rights of parents, children, and the idea of "home" and "homeland." While the first section of the unit concerned those familial relationships, we want to shift our focus (though not change topic) to the related idea of homeland. These are the questions that I want to ask you to try to clarify in your mind:

• What does "homeland" mean?
• If your parents are from, say, Germany, but you moved to New Jersey as a baby, what's your homeland? If you were born in Jersey but your parents are from Ghana, can you say that you consider your homeland Ghana, even if you've never been there?
• Say you are born in a homeland, but you don't feel as though you fit there? Is it okay to reject your own homeland?
• If where you're from determines how you see the world, can you shake free from your homeland?

What Skill Are We Practicing Today?

Today, we're reading a short story, "The White Umbrella," and thinking about it. The story is a beautifully crafted one about a young girl struggling with exactly the same issues we wish to consider.

However, the story is one that functions a great deal on the level of metaphor. The narrator comes to an understanding that resolves her internal conflict (which is the same as to say that she learns the theme), but because the story is so symbolic, I found that many of my smart students would miss it. So, while the story goes here naturally thematically, we need to review how metaphor and symbol work. So, let's.

What You Need to Know to Help You Complete Your Work

1. One of the important characteristics of literary language is that it is figurative. Literal language means just what is says, e.g., "He is a poor teammate whose negative attitude is diminishing our team's chance to win games." If you looked up all the words in that sentence in the dictionary, you'd know what the sentence meant. Figurative language, though, requires that the reader make connections that aren't in the original meanings. "He's a cancer in the locker room," means the same thing as the first sentence, but if you looked up all of the words and took them to mean exactly what they said, the sentence wouldn't make any sense.
2. The basic kind of figurative language is metaphor, which says that "[THING 1] is [THING 2 THAT'S IN A TOTALLY DIFFERENT CATEGORY]." Thing 1 and Thing 2 in the formula have a connection that the reader has to use creativity to figure out.
3. Sometimes, the connection is not perfectly clear between THING 1 and THING 2. Then, you can use the words "like" or "as" to make a simile, as in "his negative attitude is like a cancer in on our team." This is a little weaker than the original metaphor, but it's clearer. Similes are a great way to start using creative comparisons, though more confident writers usually like the stronger A=B; it's shorter and sharper.
4. Lastly, and most importantly for today is the toughest of all these things to spot. When a writer is telling a story, they something create a metaphor for an important invisible idea in that story, like the desire, a character's personality, the internal conflict, or the theme. All of these are invisible, but writers should show things in their stories. So, they make a metaphor and then place it inside the action of the story. For example, Lois Lowry wants to show that Jonas views the world in a more complicated, nuanced way than everybody else in The Giver. They all see the world as simple and clear and obvious, ruling out messy, ambiguous things like creativity, or love, or judgment. We would say that they see everything "in black and white." Lowry goes one step further and has the characters in the book literally (in the plot) see everything in black and white, but permits Jonas and the Giver to perceive color. Therefore, the colorblindness of the citizens is a symbol for their inability to understand the new, messier, richer world that Jonas comes to know.
5. When you write a symbol analysis, make it a paragraph long. First, simply state the perceivable thing in the story that is a symbol (this category is broad, so a character can be a symbol (a person is a kind of object) or anything that isn't an idea). Then, example its literal role in the plot, such as "Jonas's ability to see in color marks him as different and special, and is one of the reasons he is chosen to be the Receiver." Follow the symbol's journey through the entire story. Then, explain the symbolic meaning of the symbol.

The Text

So, "The White Umbrella" by Gish Jen. If you recognize the distinctive name of today's author, it might be because she was also the author of the review we read a couple weeks ago about Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother.

Assignment

Choose a symbol from the story and write a symbol analysis of it in Google Drive.

30.2. We Can Best Learn about Homelands by Learning about Immigrants SL1.

What Are We Learning Today?
Today, we're practicing reading things and turning them into useful notes for discussion.


How do We Do This?

Today, we're going to take "Chain of Main Idea" Notes. This is like the summary, but faster, shorter, and can be done in the margin.

Why Learn How to Take Margin Notes?

Many times you are asked to read something before a class and be ready to talk about it the next day. This is tough if you don't know what's important. Taking notes on the document or on a file right near it allows you to create a little map in the margin. Then, once you are in class, you have proof that you read it, even if you get stumped on a question, but, more importantly, you can scan down the margin notes to find the spot that you think you missed.

What about Highlighting or Underlining Important Stuff?

I really like that idea, but it never worked out for me (as a student or teacher). Here are my reasons:

1. Taking the margin notes forces you to think and decide what's important. With highlighting, sometimes you're thinking, sometimes you're not.
2. If you don't put things into your own words, you (and your teacher) can't tell if you actually understand it or whether you just picked it out.
3. Everything can be viewed important in an article, or it wouldn't have been printed -- it costs money to print words (writers sometimes get paid by the word, and ink and paper cost money). With highlighting or underlining, sometimes people go nuts and highlight half the page. They might totally see a value to everything, but that doesn't help them sort out what's most important.

So, I circle names and draw an arrow to the margin where I wrote the initials to save work. I sometimes underline things that seem important to me but aren't the main idea. You have to find something that works for you, but you'll find that the underlining way usually leaves half of kids still without any grip on what they read, just a bunch of "work." Schoolwork without learning is a waste of time, both yours and mine. 

How to Do This

1. For each paragraph, express the main idea in three or four words or symbols, like "Americans distrust gov't," or "Scientists excited about Venus."
2. If you were writing, you'd write it on the copy in the column. If you're reading, type it up in a list in Google Drive or use the annotate feature if you're reading a downloaded .pdf.
3. Use abbreviations. Here's a list of suggested ones:

• = for is/am/was/were/are/be/being/been
• b/c for because
• -> for If/then (like "More spending -> more jobs," for "If people spend more, then there'll be more job."
• initials for people's names (MLK for Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.)
• + for and

anything else that makes it shorter, but allows you to still understand it.

One Time Together


Open one of these and take margin notes for it on a piece of paper or in Google Drive.

"Immigrants' Children Find Better Life, Study Shows" from The New York Times
"Many U.S. Immigrants' Children Seek American Dream Abroad" from The New York Times
"Success of Immigrants' Children Measured" from The New York Times
"A Way to Teach American" from The New York Times
"Fatalism and the American Dream" from The New York Times
"Immigrants in America: The Second-Generation Story" from CNN
"Immigrant Study: 'Second Generation' Has Edge" from National Public Radio
"More Than Mexican: Study Highlights Diversity Among Latinos" from CNN
"Greeks Ask Themselves: 'Who's a Greek?" from National Public Radio
"When Chanting 'USA! USA!' is Not Patriotic" from CNN
"Path to Citizenship Should be a Long Hike" from CNN

We'll be talking about this stuff to answer our big questions, but I am not going to tell you which question I am going to ask. Test out your notes to see if you can use them to find the spot where you need to get your text evidence.